1. The Pitch
2. So on my last pitch, I only got one comment and it didn't have any criticism so I kept my pitch the same. It was encouraging for me to read and I was glad to see that I wasn't the only with this problem.
3. Like I said, I didn't add any changes to my pitch except some different wording.
Kalvin,
ReplyDeleteI know that you are not in my commenting schedule for this week, but I guess only one person in my group had time to do the exercise. First-off, great idea. It definitely is a revolutionary step to take in order to reduce wait times in parking lots. Maybe for the next Elevator Pitch assignment you can sneak some details in about how you want it to work, how it updates, i.e. like via satellite and potential information about cost to customer.
Hey Kalvin! After listening to your pitch about your idea of an app that would allow us to find parking on campus fast and easy, I immediately wanted to download it. I just like you have wasted countless minutes that add up into hours trying to find a spot to park on our campus. During your pitch you spoke confidently and smoothly about the topic of your idea which made your pitch conveying.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job in your last pitch! I think your app idea is a great idea. It would make the parking lots less jammed at all times. I hate trying to find parking on campus! I think Keith is right about using satellites to find spots. Overall, great job! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Kalvin,
ReplyDeleteVery strong delivery on your pitch! It's good to know you found a delivery that worked for you the first pitch and didn't change anything except a bit of the wording the second time. I agree that parking on campus needs to be revolutionized, I pitched a similar app concept called Space Race in the Thunderdome if you're interested in checking it out. It could come down to a simple innovative app to help thousands of students and staff save time and have peace of mind that they parked in the right spot. Keep up the great work.
Hey Kalvin,
ReplyDeleteI love the concept of "revolutionizing" parking. I am very much aware of the hassle of trying to find parking, especially with few minutes to spare before class starts. I also loved how you grounded the idea of shaving down wasted time down.
Great work!