The Pitch.
Based on my most recent feedback, I added information on how I will be able to track parking in my app. Thanks to one of the comments, I was able to include a part where I explain that I will be using satellite information in order to locate parking. I kept everything else relatively the same because of the positive feedback that I received last time. It's hard to change a lot when your pitch can only be a minute so I kept it short and simple. I explained what it did and who it was for.
Kalvin,
ReplyDeleteAs someone who had to walk over a mile to get to places on the UF campus. You did a great job of reeling us in, painting a picture and setting us up to want this app. I think you could have had someone record you and it would have been more professional, but good job.
Kalvin,
ReplyDeleteI love this elevator pitch because I can strongly relate to the story at the beginning. I am constantly stressed out on exam days, even when I give myself 30 minutes to find a parking spot. Living off campus is so frustrating and I think everyone would love to have an app like this.